Essay-Traffic accident of life in Seremban

November 29, 2011

Traffic Accident of Life in Seremban
Seremban, Tuesday- A horrifying road accident occur last midnight which led to a fatal of a man and injured five other passengers including a 4-year-old girl.

According to one of the witnesses, Madam Yong said that the car was driven in high speed on the road and suddenly it was out of control. She was still trembling in fear when giving an account of the traffic accident.

The spectators telephoned the fire station for assistance. The fire fighters and the policemen arrived at the scene fifteen minutes later. After the police investigation, they claimed that the car was oversped which led the car to skid on the slippery road and went straight into the side railing of the expressway, then finally landed in a filthy stream.

The accident happened at the North-South Expressway, about 287 kilometres from Nilai. The dead, Zainal Abu Samah aged 67 was suffocated when his car turned turtle in the deep stream. The passer-by at the scene and the firemen cooperated to pull the driver Ramli out of the wreckage. then he was rushed to the hospital but died after two hours later.

Other passengers were still alive but they suffered sever injuries. The driver's 4-year-old girl was fallen asleep when the accident happened. She cried after the policemen informed her about the death of her father.

The six were returning home after seeing their relatives off to Mecca at Kuala Lumpur International Airport but unfortunately they were stranded in the accident when their car hit the side of the express way.

The passer-by took them to the nearest hospital for treatment. All the victims were treated well in Seremban Hospital. Their relatives consoled them. Zainal's body had been taken to the Seremban Hospital Mortuary. His relatives came to the hospital and paid their deepest condolescence for him.

Zainal's spouse,Mary fainted in the hospital as she could not accept the sudden death of his husband. The other victims were all in stable condition. The traffic congestion was over when the traffic policeman came and instructed the road drivers.

Comment: Good,but be careful with VERB-form (past tense,past perfect/participle etc.) preposition                  
                  & phrasal verbs
Marks: Content 12/12
            Language 13/20

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