''Boom!'' I was awaken by the sound of something crashing on the engine. I was very curious and wanted to know what had happened to the aircraft which I was boarding in. It was weird that the aircraft  was like swinging in the in the air. When I looked out of the window, I was shocked to see smoke coming out from the engine. My jaw was hanging down and my eyes were popping out too. '' Oh my God!'' On seeing the scene, I immediately loosen my safety belt and wanted to flee from the plane.

''Open the door! Hurry up, the plane is going to crash!'' I was so panic that I could not control my emotion. I was trying to open the emergency exit. Oh no, I was going nuts now! Out of a sudden, a charming air stewardess grabbed hold of my hand and tried to calm me down. ''Miss, you can't do this! We will try to handle it.'' She ordered me to sit down and wait for the captain's instructions.

I went back to my seat and waited patiently. Other passengers began to scream and cry after they saw the chaos. They felt very uncomfortable with their situation and started to scold the captain. Some of them even quarrelled and were busy getting their luggage that made the aircraft filled with chaos and terror. I kept on praying while all the air stewardess were discussing on how to cope with the big problem. One of them went to see the captain.

"Ladies and gentlemen, the plane is going to land at Hudson River five minutes from now. Please fasten your safety belt. Then take out the life jacket under you seat and follow the instructions by our captain. Thank you." After we heard the announcement, we were really over the moon. Soon, the plane landed perfectly on the Hudson River. All of us aboard safely and walked out of that sinking aircraft. Then, we were standing on the aircraft's wings and waited for the rescuer to save us. I was struggling in my emotion and burst into tears while waiting for the rescuer's boat. The other felt relieved and hugged together.

The scene was full of crowds. I almost had no room for elbow. Finally, I felt uneasy to plow my way through that crowd. My relatives were waiving their hands when they saw me standing near the port. It was truly a narrow escape for me. Although this incident happened to me, I hope that this tragedy only stay in my memory. Pilot Capt. Chesley was indeed a wise man. He was our hero.

Comment: Very good.
Marks: 42/50

A woman with blonde, sleek and alluring hair is my mother. Her name is Mary who married my father. She's the person who had the biggest influence in my life. I can still remember vividly every precious moment I spent with my loving mother.

''Linda! Linda!" I saw my mother running towards me and she looked pale and was sweating profusely. I was eager to know what had happened to her and grab hold of her shoulder. ''Daddy has passed away in an accident!'' My eyes were popping out and my jaw was hanging down after I heard about my father's death. I felt very upset and burst into tears. My mother had a strong will and consoled me. Both of us were so anxious and concerned about our future.

Without my father, my family lost a backbone and my mother had to bring home the bacon by herself. She woke up early in the morning to prepare breakfast for me daily. She had lots of wrinkles on her face now and she seemed tired all the time. She had to suffer and struggle for many years just to earn some income for me to pay the fees. However, I didn't appreciate all the things that my mum had done for me!

Everyday, when the clock struck seven I went to school as usual. After that, I joined my peers to play truant and we boarded a bus to go window-shopping at Berjaya Times Square. On the other hand, mu mum was working diligently at a Chinese restaurant. She worked as a servant and served the dishes to customers everyday. However, she was always been scolded and blamed by her evil boss. She never gave up and kept on praying that someday I would never be like her.

I went home very late every day and my mother usually fell asleep in her bedroom while waiting for me. I peeped into the keyhole of the door and saw piles of money on the desk. At that moment, I was determined to steal the money to purchase all the things that I longed for many years ago.

''Vroom...vroom!'' I kept the money and intended to share the happiness with my friends. Unfortunately, my mum was awaken by the sound of the motorcycle. She was very angry and her face was filled with emotion. Tears were rolling down her cheeks and she immediately knelt down and pleaded towards me.

''Linda, Linda give me the money back!'' I turned a deaf ear and still insisted to go to my friends' house.

My friends and I were really over the moon as we could purchase lots of things with the money that I had stolen. We snacked on junk food and sipped beverages in my friends' house. We continued our blast and switched on the television to sing karaoke. out of a sudden, my friend Sean elbowed me. ''Lin...Linda, your mum is on the television!'' I thought that they were joking and after I saw the scene where my mother intended to commit suicide, I was literally shocked! The reporter said that my mum was not able to pay the money to the 'Along'. Therefore she knew that her days were numbered and she wanted to give a come to her life to settle all the payment that she had borrowed from them.

I felt very guilty! If I gave back the money, would my mother still be alive? I cried in front of my mother's carcasses at the graveyard. I leaned on the ground and looked beyond the sky. ''I need to change!'' I mumbled and recalled all the songs of my family.

''1,2,3 say cheese!'' Today I attend my graduation ceremony. My friends and I are capturing photographs for remembrance. I never regret what I have done now! My parents are six feet under the ground and they must be happy if they can share this valuable moment with me. Since that incident, I realized that family is crucial in our lives. Parents are indeed dominant in the family relationship. My mum really influence me a lot, she raise me up!

''Mummy, you're always in my heart! Your beauty is eternal!''

Comment: Good.
Marks: 38/50

Seremban, Tuesday- A horrifying road accident occur last midnight which led to a fatal of a man and injured five other passengers including a 4-year-old girl.

According to one of the witnesses, Madam Yong said that the car was driven in high speed on the road and suddenly it was out of control. She was still trembling in fear when giving an account of the traffic accident.

The spectators telephoned the fire station for assistance. The fire fighters and the policemen arrived at the scene fifteen minutes later. After the police investigation, they claimed that the car was oversped which led the car to skid on the slippery road and went straight into the side railing of the expressway, then finally landed in a filthy stream.

The accident happened at the North-South Expressway, about 287 kilometres from Nilai. The dead, Zainal Abu Samah aged 67 was suffocated when his car turned turtle in the deep stream. The passer-by at the scene and the firemen cooperated to pull the driver Ramli out of the wreckage. then he was rushed to the hospital but died after two hours later.

Other passengers were still alive but they suffered sever injuries. The driver's 4-year-old girl was fallen asleep when the accident happened. She cried after the policemen informed her about the death of her father.

The six were returning home after seeing their relatives off to Mecca at Kuala Lumpur International Airport but unfortunately they were stranded in the accident when their car hit the side of the express way.

The passer-by took them to the nearest hospital for treatment. All the victims were treated well in Seremban Hospital. Their relatives consoled them. Zainal's body had been taken to the Seremban Hospital Mortuary. His relatives came to the hospital and paid their deepest condolescence for him.

Zainal's spouse,Mary fainted in the hospital as she could not accept the sudden death of his husband. The other victims were all in stable condition. The traffic congestion was over when the traffic policeman came and instructed the road drivers.

Comment: Good,but be careful with VERB-form (past tense,past perfect/participle etc.) preposition                  
                  & phrasal verbs
Marks: Content 12/12
            Language 13/20

Who is your idol? Almost everyone has their idols, including me, I also have my own favourite idol. That person whose qualifies I particular admire is my father. He is forty-eight years old now. For me, I think my father is the most industrious man in the world. He is very fair and tall. He is still very healthy because he always takes balanced diet. He dislikes to consume alcoholic drinks and does not smoke at all. He is really a great husband and a great father too.

I read about this topic last week. Actually I just had a quick flip through the green book(Language Description book) on that day. I found it quite interesting, so I decided to share it here. I don't think I'll read this book if there's no examination for this subject.  >.< 
Interjections are used in our daily conversation. I think I use a lot of 'hmm' .... :) We need to learn interjections and how to use them correctly. This green book is really useful and has more details about this topic. It's very easy for us to study. How nice if we had 'green book' in every subjects.

Interjection is used to express a sudden emotion.

Examples: Ouch!  I'm so happy!   X
                  Wow! I'm so happy!     /

To express happiness
yipee,hurray,wow

To express sadness
Oh,aww,emm

To express disgust
ermh,huh,disgusting

To express anger
grr,urgh,s**t

To express surprise
wow,amazing

To express shock
ooh

To express pain
ouch,ugh,argh

To express pleasure
emm,alas,bravo


Reference
Norhazian Mat Sapian and Yong Lee Choo(2011). Language Description 1, Selangor: Oxford Fajar Sdn.Bhd.

That's all. ^.^ 11/11/11